drafting“Wren, time-dilated inside a near-death experience, builds a found family in an afterlife town — from recast versions of the people who hurt her in life.”
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Scene craft — flat scene
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Flat scene. No value shift recorded — the scene opens and closes on the same emotional charge. Sometimes that is deliberate. Usually it means the scene has not earned its place yet.